Nude Painter
Dr Mallick had posted following senryus in Muse on 11th Jan 2009.
nude painter…
falls short of paints
to robe her
nude painter…
sans internal eyes he looks for
skin beauty
nude painter…
he collects sea weeds
gems lie deeper
I had liked them and responded with a few ideas of mine on the same theme as under :
Dear Mallick ji ,a good posting on nude painter. Here are a few of my attempts, subject to your expert scrutiny and corrections, since I am a novice in senryus and nude paintings both :
1. nude painter
shuts windows of studio
to prevent peeping toms
2. nude painter
joins nudist club
to get inspired
3. nude painter
lacks models
paints own nude
4. nude painter
visits art gallery
absent mindedly in buff
As per my request,Mallickji has edited my pieces and the final versions of first three were posted on Muse under responses on 12th Jan 2010 as under :
1. nude painter…
to prevent peeping toms
shuts studio door
2. nude painter…
joins nudist club
for inspiration
3. nude painter..
in absense of models
sketches self-portrait
I thank Dr Mallick for improving my ideas.The last one about the painter visiting the art gallery in buff was censored for obvious reasons though I loved the situation.Each to his/her own !!
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